Poem (3) 
Monster Karen
Karen is my daughter-in-law
But she is a monster
And an incredible actor
She pretends to be caring
But what are behind the scenes?
She loathes me and my antique furnitures
And claims that they are filthy
and unhealthy for the family
Especially my treasured bed,
that she thinks fill of bugs and vermin
Worse thing is, she called that 'the monster '
It makes her fume
When i occupy one of the rooms
She had intentions
Of getting me out
I know that
And it is somehow making her mad
to let Sai Khong nod his head
At work, she complains about me
to her colleagues
How troublesome, dirty
eyesore, loathsome i was to her
And how i mispronounce her children's names
Monster KarenKaren is my daughter-in-law
But she is a monster
And an incredible actor
She pretends to be caring
But what are behind the scenes?
She loathes me and my antique furnitures
And claims that they are filthy
and unhealthy for the family
Especially my treasured bed,
that she thinks fill of bugs and vermin
Worse thing is, she called that 'the monster '
It makes her fume When i occupy one of the rooms
She had intentions
Of getting me out
I know that
And it is somehow making her mad
to let Sai Khong nod his head
At work, she complains about me
to her colleagues
How troublesome, dirty
eyesore, loathsome i was to her
And how i mispronounce her children's names
I am now very sick 
And they were planning what to do with me
It's best to get her to the hospital
Suggested the doctor
The next moment her face became brighter
As if she was about to conquer the world
'It'll be a great idea, doctors know the best'
I really wanted to shout at her
To spew out all her bad intentions
And to beg my son to let me die on my bed
But it was to no avail
I was too frail
to voice that out
The next thing i know is,
Evil Karen would be throwing my treasured bed away
Until Sai Khong tells her that
those things actually worth a little fortune
Materialisticcally
She did be starting to be concern about me
while she sells away
my treasure, her monster
And they were planning what to do with me
It's best to get her to the hospital
Suggested the doctor
The next moment her face became brighter
As if she was about to conquer the world
'It'll be a great idea, doctors know the best'
I really wanted to shout at her
To spew out all her bad intentions
And to beg my son to let me die on my bed
But it was to no availI was too frail
to voice that out
The next thing i know is,
Evil Karen would be throwing my treasured bed away
Until Sai Khong tells her that
those things actually worth a little fortune
Materialisticcally
She did be starting to be concern about me
while she sells away
my treasure, her monster
It is a nice and interesting poem. The poem has a good structure and contains a good use of vocabulary words. I liked the way you describe the characters in the poem. Great job!
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Nice and creative poem! but there's a spelling error -> filthy (:
ReplyDeleteYour poem is very long but it is also creative. You described all the features of the story. But there's one problem, I think you need to add a title for your poem, overall it is a well written poem. Good job! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your comments :)
ReplyDeleteYou describe what karen did to grandmother in a very detailed manner . Nicely done
ReplyDeleteIt is very detailed and i could just understand the whole story just by reading your poem, the poem also have a good tune.
ReplyDeleteThe poem succinctly depicts the emotional upheavals experienced by Old Grandmother. You have also showed great empathy for her.
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